Direct Response Copywriter On A Marketing Fundamental

Want More Revenue? Remember The Basics.

A Focus on Direct Marketing Fundamentals. Part 1.

I recently watched a video from a conference where a group of CMOs were talking about AI. Maybe you love this whole AI thing. Maybe it gives you a whopping headache.

Either way, these "high-powered" CMOs never once talked about what really matters when it comes to driving revenue, which, last time I checked, is our job as marketers. The CMOs talked about "new team structures" and so on.

In this AI fog, it's time for a series about marketing basics that drive revenue.

Basic #1. People Want to Feel Better About Themselves ... Or Just Better ...

Golfers have their pain points. Golfers get stressed about everything from how they look to making a four-foot putt. Golfers, just like everyone else, want feel better about their game and themselves.

I was watching a tournament last year and, on a straightforward hole, I watched Scottie Scheffler pump his tee shot OB. And, last time I checked, he's the best golfer on the planet. Nobody masters our game and everyone wants to get better. It's the driving force in our business.

When you position your product or service as something that will help golfers feel better about their game, short-term or long-term, you're on your way to making a sale and starting a long and profitable relationship with that customer.

To get started, focus on the most important benefit ... the #1 reason golfers love your product or service. Then build everything around that #1 benefit. It's a strategy that's helped me help my golf clients generate millions of dollars in revenue.

Direct Response Copywriter On Why Curiosity Is So Powerful In Copy

People are generally curious, especially when it comes to a subject they’re interested in. A direct response copywriter should definitely be curious about everything. My curiosity is off the charts when it comes to the products and services I’m writing about. My first goal, when I start researching something new, is to find out the #1 benefit that motivates people to buy.

I want to get as much curiosity into my copy as I can, depending on what I’m selling. There needs to be a ton of curiosity in the copy when I’m selling an information/training product.

The headline formula I use is The John Caples headline formula. Interest = Curiosity + Benefit. The “How To” headline fits the formula.

If your headlines aren’t following The John Caples headline formula, then it’s highly likely the content and content isn’t being read.

What else can follow The John Caples headline formula?

    1. Email subject lines.
    1. Subheads.
    1. Pull quotes.
    1. Captions for photos and graphics.

Fascination bullets are all about curiosity and they also follow The John Caples headline formula. Bottom Line, a publishing company that used to be called Boardroom, used fascination bullets in its magalogs selling books and newsletters. In fact, those promotions are pretty much just one big exercise in fascination bullets.

  • What never to eat on a plane.
  • The right way and the wrong way to fight high blood pressure.
  • Straight talk about the future of IPOs.

I have about 20 fascination bullet templates. Curiosity is a powerful weapon in direct response copy and I like to use curiosity as much as I can. Check your copy to see how much curiosity you're using.

Direct Response Copywriter Wtih A Message For Marketing Managers and Decision Makers

If you’re a marketing decision maker, then make sure you read this. Your career depends on what I’m going to say.

The people above you are demanding a ton of top-line revenue while you minimize what you spend on traffic, etc. You know this.

Top sports coaches are top sports coaches, in large part, because they are ruthless.

If they have a player who is “OK” then they find a player who is a lot better.

You might like your current direct response copywriter. They might be “OK” or “pretty good.” If that’s the case, then your career depends on finding a copywriter who is “elite” and can write copy that will bring you massively more measurable revenue than your current copywriter. We’re talking millions of dollars in additional revenue.

I’m talking direct response copy, not branding copy.

AI will not help you one bit here. Just read what Dan Kennedy, Ryan Levesque, and other top direct marketers are saying. AI has a fundamental flaw when it comes to direct response copywriting.

Yes, finding an “elite” direct response copywriter isn’t easy and you’ll have to pay more to get them on your team. But the work of this copywriter will propel you into the ranks of the “elite” level marketing managers.

You won’t be yet another marketing manager who gets kicked to the curb because they couldn’t produce revenue … and has to find a totally different line of work.

This might seem brutal, but it’s true, when you really think about it.

Direct Response Copywriter On AI's Fatal Flaw ... When It Comes To Copy That Will Drive Revenue

AI is all the rage and a newsletter from The Wall Street Journal recently said that agencies and marketing departments are ready to produce copy that is actually pretty good and not “AI Slop.”

When it comes to direct response copywriting, AI has a fatal flaw.

Let me explain.

When I’m starting a project with a new client, I go through my full research process. One thing that’s crucial … the #1 thing that motivates the client or customer to buy your product or service.

This “#1 thing” almost always surprises me.

The information comes from someone in the company who really knows what really motivates people to buy.

I can build all my copy around this reason. This tactic has helped me write a lot of copy that's generated a ton of revenue.

If I rely on AI for this vital information, it will send me in the wrong direction and everything I write will be totally off target.

Why do I want this?

I’ll rely on my process for writing revenue-generating direct response copy and let the "you must use AI" crowd get it totally wrong.

However, these people can say “I’m great with AI and thus a great marketer” for what it’s worth.

One more thing … NOBODY has shown me direct response copy created by AI that’s beating direct response copy written by a top direct response copywriter. Look above and you know why.