Direct Response Copywriter on What Really Works

I just wrote the copy for a product in the golf space. As soon as the product launched and the shopping cart opened, the shopping cart crashed due to sheer volume/demand. A good problem to have.

The company that is promoting the product had to shut down the launch, beef up its server capacity, then relaunch. Everything is hunky dory now. It was a blockbuster launch, despite the glitch.

I'd like to take credit, as the copywriter, for copy that shut down the servers but I can't. Here's why this launch was so successful.

• A big list with globs of hungry and highly-qualified traffic.
• An excellent relationship with the list based on superb content.
• Awesome "teaser" emails to get everyone fired up about the product.
• A unique, top quality product that is different from the typical "how to hold the club" golf DVD.
• Three major revisions of the copy before it went live. A healthy dose of persistence.
• A strong and clear sales page.
• The ability to add server capacity at the last minute to avert final hurdle disaster. Flexibility.

As a direct response copywriter, I wish I could claim total credit but direct response copy is just part of a successful launch. If the product has no merit and there's no traffic, there's nothing a direct response copywriter can do to help. If there's plenty of traffic, the offer is exceptional, and the product is great, then I'm simply closing the sale and helping to break records and shut down servers. However, with moderate traffic and a modest product and offer, I can help to make a significant difference.

Still, while it's never good when the shopping cart shuts down due to demand, it's a good problem to have: you've discovered what really works.

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I'm a direct response copywriter. I specialize in providing direct response copy for the direct marketing environment for clients around the planet. I specialize in sales page copy, landing page copy and copy that persuades readers to pull out their credit card and buy. Enter your info to the right for my free series: Seven Steps to High Converting Copy. Or contact me here if you have a project you'd like me to quote.

I'm also a Dan Kennedy Certified Copywriter for Info-Marketers.

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Disclaimer for the above.

The Dan Kennedy Copywriter for Info-Marketers Certification is awarded to professional copywriters who have successfully completed a course of study of preparation for such copywriting.  This Certification has not been provided by an accredited education institution.  It does not constitute endorsement of or liability for any individual copywriter by Mr. Kennedy or any companies or organizations affiliated with Mr. Kennedy. The client's relationship is solely with the individual copywriter retained via any agreement.

Direct Response Copywriter on Creative Flexibility

My clients are almost all direct marketers. This means they ALL test like crazy.

If you take a peek at my portfolio, you’ll see a wide variety of styles and formats. But it’s all direct response copy.

Some clients want “pure” pedal-to-the-metal DR copy. Others want it toned down. Some use a format that’s built around graphics.

As a direct response copywriter, one of my jobs is to give the client exactly the style of direct response copy they want. Because that’s the type of copy that converts…based on their testing data.

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I'm a direct response copywriter. I specialize in providing direct response copy for the direct marketing environment for clients around the planet. I specialize in sales page copy, landing page copy and copy that persuades readers to pull out their credit card and buy. Enter your info to the right for my free series: Seven Steps to High Converting Copy. Or contact me here if you have a project you'd like me to quote.

I'm also a Dan Kennedy Certified Copywriter for Info-Marketers.

Disclaimer for the above.

The Dan Kennedy Copywriter for Info-Marketers Certification is awarded to professional copywriters who have successfully completed a course of study of preparation for such copywriting.  This Certification has not been provided by an accredited education institution.  It does not constitute endorsement of or liability for any individual copywriter by Mr. Kennedy or any companies or organizations affiliated with Mr. Kennedy. The client's relationship is solely with the individual copywriter retained via any agreement.

Direct Response Copywriter on Life Before Direct Marketing

You’ve heard it before: think like your prospect. Get into their shoes.

And so on.

When I’m writing golf copy, it’s pretty easy: I’m a golfer. I know what golfers want. It’s a little more difficult when I’m writing copy for a product I wouldn’t normally buy…like a male testosterone supplement. And yes, I wrote a ton of copy for a product called Nugenix. And no, it’s not a product I currently need. Just for the record.

To get started, I like to use my pre-flight checklist, which is a must for any direct response copywriter or direct response marketer.

However, there’s a step that every direct marketer should take.

Think back to the days before you were in direct response...before the “but wait, there’s more…” phraseology started to invade your mind. I started my direct response journey about 10 years ago. Before then, I bought products based on direct response advertising. I knew nothing about headlines, bullets, CTAs, etc. I was just a normal consumer with a problem or dream. That’s the person I’m trying to reach.

About 15 years ago, I remember buying a golf product that Greg Norman marketed through an infomercial. In my teens, I bought a series of Time Life books because I got a letter in the mail telling me my life would be better with these beautiful books in my house. I’m sure I bought many other products and services because a direct response copywriter persuaded me to the take the next step in the sales process.

The overwhelming majority of people…potential customers…know NOTHING about direct response copywriting or direct response copywriting. Proof: the blank stares I receive when I tell someone that I’m a direct response copywriter.

One of the biggest mistakes a direct response copywriter can make is to write to impress other direct response copywriters. Quite honestly, I don’t care what another copywriter thinks about my work. I only care about response and conversion and the revenue I can generate for clients.

And to max out that conversion and revenue, I have to think back to the days before I knew anything about direct response. So don't get too immersed in the technical aspects of direct response. Remember that regular people, not direct response marketers, are the ones buying stuff.

And one more tip...think about what you're thinking when YOU are buying something in response to a direct response campaign.

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I'm a direct response copywriter. I specialize in providing direct response copy for the direct marketing environment for clients around the planet. I specialize in sales page copy, landing page copy and copy that persuades readers to pull out their credit card and buy. Enter your info to the right for my free series: Seven Steps to High Converting Copy. Or contact me here if you have a project you'd like me to quote.

I'm also a Dan Kennedy Certified Copywriter for Info-Marketers.

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Disclaimer for the above.

The Dan Kennedy Copywriter for Info-Marketers Certification is awarded to professional copywriters who have successfully completed a course of study of preparation for such copywriting.  This Certification has not been provided by an accredited education institution.  It does not constitute endorsement of or liability for any individual copywriter by Mr. Kennedy or any companies or organizations affiliated with Mr. Kennedy. The client's relationship is solely with the individual copywriter retained via any agreement.

Direct Response Copywriter on the Perfect Headline

You've likely heard about the importance of the headline in copy. As a direct response copywriter, I have a large swipe file of successful headlines.

But, at its core, what is a headline in direct response copywriting?

It's a deal...

Read this copy and you'll get this.

"This" needs to be highly specific, the more specific the better. Follow the "deal" model and you can get the headline to perform its most important task: persudade the reader to read the body copy.

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I'm a direct response copywriter. I specialize in providing direct response copy for the direct marketing environment for clients around the planet. I specialize in sales page copy, landing page copy and copy that persuades readers to pull out their credit card and buy. Enter your info to the right for my free series: Seven Steps to High Converting Copy. Or contact me here if you have a project you'd like me to quote.

I'm also a Dan Kennedy Certified Copywriter for Info-Marketers.

Disclaimer for the above.

The Dan Kennedy Copywriter for Info-Marketers Certification is awarded to professional copywriters who have successfully completed a course of study of preparation for such copywriting.  This Certification has not been provided by an accredited education institution.  It does not constitute endorsement of or liability for any individual copywriter by Mr. Kennedy or any companies or organizations affiliated with Mr. Kennedy. The client's relationship is solely with the individual copywriter retained via any agreement.

Direct Response Copywriter on the Problems with Inbound Marketing

About 4 years ago, the big buzz-phrase in my space was “Inbound Marketing” due, primarily, to the book by Brian Halligan, Dharmesh Shah, and David Meerman.

As with 99% of marketing books, Inbound Marketing provided nothing really new. The book was mostly an advertisement for HubSpot, the company that Halligan and Shah ran. Perhaps they still run the company. I don’t really care. But the book is really just a repurposing of common marketing knowledge.

There’s absolutely nothing wrong with writing a book that provides information AND promotes you and your services. I actually think it’s a great marketing tactic. But the concept of inbound marketing is flawed.

Here’s the premise of the book…from the Amazon description.

Traditional "outbound" marketing methods like cold-calling, email blasts, advertising, and direct mail are increasingly less effective. People are getting better at blocking these interruptions out using Caller ID, spam protection, TiVo, etc. People are now increasingly turning to Google, social media, and blogs to find products and services. Inbound Marketing helps you take advantage of this change by showing you how to get found by customers online.

From my perspective as a direct response copywriter, I disagree with the premise of the book and the premise of Inbound Marketing.

If you have a restaurant, you have two primary ways to get business.

1. Wait for people to walk in the door. And deal with anyone and everyone.
2. Find the people you really want to walk in the door, tell them you want their business, and encourage them to return and spend more.

#1 is 'inbound' and #2 is 'outbound.'

Even with only modest SEO traffic and almost no social media, I get plenty of inbound leads. Many of them are serious marketers with good budgets. I’m not complaining. My website has helped me get great contracts and that’s partly the result of all the work I’ve put into my website.

Let’s go back to the restaurant.

The restaurant never really knows who is going to walk through that door. The diners could be cheap and looking for deals. They might not drink much wine or beer…vital to the financial viability of most restaurants.

But the restaurant could…get this…advertise to the people in more affluent neighborhoods using a direct response campaign starting with a list of people who make globs of cash.

These people would spend more. They would buy steaks instead of hamburgers and order bottles of wine instead of ‘water with lemon.’ A $20 ticket becomes a $65 ticket.

The major problem with inbound marketing: the people you really want to do business with will likely miss you. They’re not always looking for new vendors. Plus there's an insane reliance on social media.

Marketing tactics are complex but strategy is really pretty simple.

1. Define financial goals.
2. Find the clients and customers who will help you reach those goals and who value what you provide.
3. Pound away at those potential clients and customers.
4. Keep those people happy and keep them coming back for more.

Generally, my worst experiences in direct response copywriting have come from inbound marketing and from responding to online ads for copywriters.

When you have identified the ideal clients and customers, a direct response copywriter can help you get them in the door…and keep them happy.

Yes...inbound marketing is a good concept and it can help but the best results often come from outbound, even though it's not fashionable.

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I'm a direct response copywriter. I specialize in providing direct response copy for the direct marketing environment for clients around the planet. I specialize in sales page copy, landing page copy and copy that persuades readers to pull out their credit card and buy. Enter your info to the right for my free series: Seven Steps to High Converting Copy. Or contact me here if you have a project you'd like me to quote.

I'm also a Dan Kennedy Certified Copywriter for Info-Marketers.

Disclaimer for the above.

The Dan Kennedy Copywriter for Info-Marketers Certification is awarded to professional copywriters who have successfully completed a course of study of preparation for such copywriting.  This Certification has not been provided by an accredited education institution.  It does not constitute endorsement of or liability for any individual copywriter by Mr. Kennedy or any companies or organizations affiliated with Mr. Kennedy. The client's relationship is solely with the individual copywriter retained via any agreement.